I just read it now. It's great. However, even though I appreciate the overall intellectual thematic metaphor, I kinda' wished those tigers would have eaten that noisy baby :)
Powerful and absolutely beautiful.
I really enjoyed seeing all the small moments in here that lead up to more powerful issues.
I came to this page by accident, but read your story anyway. You are a fantastic writer. I was engaged the whole time. I actually felt the sadness of that elephant while reading it. You are very talented and sensitive to write something like this.
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